The clouds
Form across
The blue sky
Creating patterns
Into the horizon
Form across
The blue sky
Creating patterns
Into the horizon
They leave
The sun
Lonely
Trapped
Behind
Its light
Crashes through
The trees
Sharp and
Shining through
Crashes through
The trees
Sharp and
Shining through
46 comments:
OMG!!!!!
that too my breath away!!!
wow
gr8 way ti present the pictures
the photograph of the clouds is so soft and mesmerising. i find clouds beautiful and in this one they remind me of the sea. the one of the sun, reminds me of woods and bryan adams. :) beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!!
The middle stanza is sad and true...
...but the last stanza is powerful and positive. can't keep a good guy down. :)
its a worth-the-wait post.
damn, u r so good!!!!!
and absolutely breathtaking pics. do u shoot them yourself??
cloud pic: makes me want to walk across those clouds
What the ****?
You owe us an explanation. A detailed one, or else our heads will burst.
how?
I agree with Gulnaz it took my breath away..so magical ...lost in words and captivated with the photo
Thank you
the cloud pic was so captivating..... :)
love the pics. makes me want to touch those clouds
Awesome photograph of the clouds!!
Like the way you say -
"Its light
Crashes through" - well put.
The photographs win hands down this time, but the words rise and fall beautifully.
i was jus wondering... can i ask u to post on something that i've always wanted to write abt but havent really been able to? :)
gulnaz - Thanks for all your comments. Glad you liked it so much.
paddy - Thanks for dropping by and commenting.
jaded - Thanks. Yes, I shoot all the pics myself (if not, I put it in the credits).
Kripa Shankar - What explanation would you like? :-)
iamnasra, KJ, Brood Mode, musafir - Thanks.
J - Am curious to give it a go. What is the topic?
am in love w/ d picture of d woods.
the first pic took my breath away...the clouds almost seem like waves going to crash on a shore....just beautiful!
Wow... it is too good a pic..For a moment didnt realize the clouds stuff...!! Great work..!
The clouds of course are great, but I especially appreciate the light through the trees. Spent a lot of time looking up at that sight in earlier years, and your picture catches it well.
"sharp and shining through..."
She always does find a way out, doesn't she?
i have added you to my blogroll.i hope you don't mind...thanx
Wonderful! I think this is the best post yet: The combination of words and images.
The clouds and trees are a wonderful contrast. The first light, the other dark.
I like the "As above, so below" aspect and the light from above crashing through the trees.
Very good post :-)
- Martin
I always love how you pair pictures and poems. My only question: which comes first? You have captured those pictures beautifully. Well done!
teleute, Paul - Thanks.
Anil - Thanks. Even I thought the same about the clouds.
L - Thanks for dropping by and commenting.
mermaid - Yes she does!
jaded - I don't mind at all. Thanks a lot.
luz de la luna - Thanks. Am glad you liked it so.
stan laurel - The first picture came first, then part of the poem, then the second picture, then the rest of the poem.
Excellent pairing of the pictures and the words - as always, A.
hi...if you want to read the story i wrote about, go to www.fitfulimagination.blogspot.com
bye
luved the pics :)
AM right here with you, as you make me eyes see what you see and I wait as your words captivate and intrigue. Thank you for the ride and the perfect little moment.
this is really cool!
wow with all the people surrounding you.. how would you have time to notice me?
and i just blend in the horizon of your background...
amazing! :)
Would you believe if I told you that I saw such an image first hand? I was taking a 30 minute connecting flight from chicago to a small town nearby called peoria. The plane was very small, I would say a maximum capacity of 100 people, so the plane couldnt fly higher than 15000 feet. It was a cloudy day, hence the plane was just a few feet above the clouds. Looking out through the window, I was taken aback at the beauty of the cloud formation. I thougt snow capped mountains were the most beautiful thing but the clouds won hands down. Thanks for the image. Im reliving it right now in my minds eye. Not to forget, the beautiful verses along with the photo. Neat! Btw, landed here from another blog. You have great talent buddy. Keep em coming.
one word. wow.
truly amazing.. like the way u marry the pics with words.. i had to blogroll you in mine for others to visit.. thanks & keep it coming..
the cloud picture is very nice. what camera do you use?
Not so much the words, but the contrast of the photographs (each, beautiful by itself)is muse enough..
Incredibly peaceful images and text!
I've been away so long frm blogs because of crazy life and issues I'm working out - have so much to catch up on so many blogs...specially yours!
the first pic is really quite nice ... not that the second one is not nice ...
have u ever danced on those clouds???
Diva Drip, Samudraa, Poison, Lorena, Avik, Itineranting - Thanks.
Mystique - Yes, it was.
jaded - Will just go over.
Prat, finnegan, transience - Thanks. Glad you liked it so.
Anonymous - I am noticing, aren't I? ;-)
sensiblystoned - Thanks for dropping by and for sharing your experience. Do drop in again.
Ram - Thanks for the mention on your site. Appreciate it.
Kafka on the Shore - A Canon PowerShot was used for this one.
Geetanjali - Thanks and welcome back!
Bonatellis - I wish I had. :-)
Great work A. Glad I stumbled over here, I love original poetry. I'll read your work when I have more time!!! I love how you blend the visual photos with the writing... gets the senses going.
Jaxe - Thanks a lot. Do take your time and have a look around.
hi first time here...n i must say awesome post...
still tryig to digest the words and beautiful pictures...
angelsera - Thanks for dropping by and commenting. Lookg forward to seeing you again.
Great stuff here...
Another great poem-photo collage! Thanks!
Sayesha, Anonymous Poet - Thanks. Glad you liked it.
yeah im running late but the first snap is of tales..
Ubermensch - Thanks.
Sudarshan - Thanks!
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