When the outside
Is about nothing
And the inside
Is about everything
That
Is when
You lose
Your senses
And
As you get permeated
With the moment
And the feeling
It all comes to you
The meaning
Of the moment
And living it
And
I am living
This moment
And
I am breathing
This feeling
And it comes
To me again
The beat
Breathes
Through my soul
And
I am seeing
This city
In a different light tonight
Than I ever did before
Is about nothing
And the inside
Is about everything
That
Is when
You lose
Your senses
And
As you get permeated
With the moment
And the feeling
It all comes to you
The meaning
Of the moment
And living it
And
I am living
This moment
And
I am breathing
This feeling
And it comes
To me again
The beat
Breathes
Through my soul
And
I am seeing
This city
In a different light tonight
Than I ever did before
And I am seeing this city in a different light tonight than I ever did before. The beat breathes through my soul. And it comes to me again. And I am breathing this feeling. And I am living this moment. The meaning of the moment and living it. It all comes to you. And as you get permeated with the moment and the feeling. That is when you lose your senses. When the outside is about nothing and the inside is about everything.
40 comments:
living the moment should be every man's motto irrespective of cast or creed, 'cos this moment is history the next second.it ain't gonna come back.no chance to change it, or relive it.after all life's a flower which may get cut any second.
that is a wonderful moment you describe!!! gives me a strong urge to feel it!
to feel the beat of the moment through yourself...
...to be brave to wear your inside out.
great piece, A. appreciate the format too.
I would love to hear this as a song to music one day. It is enough that it is a beautiful, intuitive piece, and it could be more. But that's me, wanting more than this moment, so it shall remain as this piece until another moment decides it will be something different:)
wunder at times if living this moment is and not thinking abt the past, the future.. its impact ... are these moment really worth it. irrespective I try to live the moment ...
Wonderful stuff :A: :-)
I often feel this way!
you sound like the vietnamese monk tich naht hanh. :)
Reaching a certain level..Like being meditating level...You cut your soul away from the distortion of life..you seem to be floating out of your body...You get high but not from earthly desires... Its amazing poem...
inspirational stuff and i agree with gulnaz about format.
but would be otally thrilled to hear this as a song:)
also thanks for checkin out my blogs.
Ah. Your signature style.
that resonated with me. it was just so clear in my head what you wrote. wonderful piece!
WOW.
hmmmmmmmm ....
Wearing the inside out.
Nice thought.
oh! dis is jst beautiful.
makes me smile.
bt u nevr did say whethr i cud link u or nt.
Just got me flipped inside out.
hmmm.. and de dual meaning is...?
;-)
thank u very much, kind sir! linked u!
:D
de ja vu... you have a nice style that creates a world of imaginated escape. feels like trying to escape a past that kept on coming back. although in this process it somehow brings redemption as well. coz it doesnt mean that the past that kept coming back is necessarily awful right?
Dear "A"
These words should be set to music. a singer all my life, I have never written any, just sung everyone else's; however, reading your words i felt like singing them.
N A m A s t e ,
MB
The verses sing......:)
And you thought
You could go sight-seeing,
When the city all time
Breathed within you!
Beautiful writing.
Rash
oh! just what i needed this moment...
Wow A:
I love this. It is as if one sentence depends on the other as they build upon each other. Neither frontward nor backward or sideways, but you just exist in the moment, your senses swimming in all that it is. Yes, there are moments that make us see things for the first time--those are the moments when the inside is about everything. A wonderful feeling of realization. I hear ya. I absolutely love the fragments of your mind. You give us pieces of you and yet, will we ever get all that you are--and with these little pieces, could we build who we think you are--i am building you based upon your words. Dawn
Interesting how you experimented with prose and poetry. I like the prose version better. I think it looks better as a string of sentences instead of the line breaks of the poem. This is just my personal taste. The theme is powerful nonetheless!
I missed this style of yours.
It never fails to drum my brain into a beat of a trance. ^_^
when r u goin to post again? miss that captivating style of urs...
Must have been quite the moment. Was it a reggae party? ;)
When's the next post?
Beautiful.......
:)
no post!
:(
i've experienced moments like this, so divine. and you have captured it wonderfully!!
enjoy the ride.
Nice stuff.
my first comment, but this post is so cool! i really enjoy your blog... =)
:) put wonderfully!!!
enjoyed it!
Kept reading and reading and reading and reading...
Inside out it is :)
Masterly - take a bow!
wow. that just struck a big chord with me. I have no words!
Poison, mermaid, thoughts, iamnasra, stan laurel, irina - Thanks for your perspective.
gulnaz, luz de la luna, Potted-flower, jaded, transience, MARYBETH, Soulless, perspective, Cori - Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.
Kafka on the Shore - Is that a good thing? :-)
irina, musafir - *bows*
finnegan, Rahul, teleute, Manjusha, Samudraa, KJ, Lorena - Thanks.
:..M..: - :-)
CalmWinds_Typhoons - Thanks. Do drop a link next time.
Bonatellis - hhmmm?
livinghigh - Actually, there is more than two.
atomicvelvetsigh - Right. :-)
Ray Ben, liquid sunshine, psychacid, stella - Thanks for dropping by here and commenting. Look forward to seeing you again.
Brood Mode - Glad to be of service.
dawn - I would love to 'see' what you have built till now.
Anonymous, Ariel, gulnaz - Take a look!
u really weave magic. its out of this world...
sneha - Thanks!
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