Soaked
In the rain
Seemingly simple
Secrets shared
Between us
Connections instantly
Created
When we met
Complete communion
Coming closer
After you left
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A dream within a dream
About Me
- . : A : .
- There is a magic in the air that permeates through the very soul of my existence. There is a stillness in the night that floods my senses beyond my imagination. There is a madness inside of me that overflows in everything that I create. There is a past behind me that is overcrowded with memories that drain me out.
29 comments:
Ha Ha...!! alliterates( literary alligators !!) in cohorts.....
Soggy memories soaked in the rain,
melting moments remembered invain,
Connections concocted in love and pain,
I live in India and you in Spain......
ps- dont kill me...its supposed to be funny...
Wwaaahh I am smitten! (Uhurm. Pardon the dog lover in me. Heehee.)
Connections instantly
Created
When we met
I can relate, only too well. I grew up taking care of almost a dozen dogs. Sigh. Thank you for posting this picture. It made my day. ^_^
mad rusty. mad.
he's lovely august... is he yours? or just from somewhere? (say he's yours.. you getmajor points if he is)
he is adorable!!!
"Complete communion
Coming closer
After you left" Perfect!
"Complete communion
Coming closer
After you left"
I like the play on space here. Complete communion suggests no more gap to be bridged or filled, but the memory brings the person even closer.
hey :A:... your poems reminds me of poems by Javed Akhtar; if you like Hindi Poetry, do lieten to Tarkash (Javed's collection)...
Beautiful... philosophical!
simple and gr88!!
your poetry stops me, makes me ponder, makes me wonder, takes me deeper...
Awww, he (she ?) is so adorable... now give us a name to go with the face :)
intense you paint
a beautiful baby you got there.
Awwwwww....
Complete communion
Coming closer
After you left
Beautiful... for i had a dog too and i lost him a year back.. .and these words can only express how i feel about him...
Cheers
thats an awesome pic. and beautiful words :)
rusty - Yes, I caught you doing the same on your latest post! :-)
Soulless, chaos, jithU, Billy, Prerona - Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Phal - In a way, yes. How many points do I get?
gulnaz, Wbix, Geetanjali - :-)
mermaid - Exactly.
feminine expressions - *bows*
Ash - It's a he. No names shall be named. ;-)
Mayur Channagere - Glad you could relate.
awww, very cute picture to go with your poem!
Lovely one. So much warmth in the thoughts and the pic.
dogs are gr8...puppies are best !!! needless to say ...the lines are terrific : connections instantly created when we met - rare but happens nevertheless....
I was thinking of the pets left behind in Louisiana and Mississippi when I read this blog...
venus, Aradhita, thoughts - Thanks.
Tabor - Thanks for dropping by and commenting.
adorable...especially the picture!
stan laurel - Thanks.
aristera says - I have not read any of her poems. Do you have a link to a site which might have them up?
yvaine - Thanks.
"Complete communion
Coming closer
After you left"
-evocative
Sudarshan - Thanks!
awesome post, very moving. loved the pic, love dogs!
Brood Mode - Glad you liked it.
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