Tuesday, September 06, 2005

Renaissance

Soggy memories
Soaked
In the rain

Seemingly simple
Secrets shared
Between us



Connections instantly
Created
When we met

Complete communion
Coming closer
After you left


31 comments:

rusty said...

Ha Ha...!! alliterates( literary alligators !!) in cohorts.....

rusty said...

Soggy memories soaked in the rain,
melting moments remembered invain,
Connections concocted in love and pain,
I live in India and you in Spain......

ps- dont kill me...its supposed to be funny...

_Soulless_ said...

Wwaaahh I am smitten! (Uhurm. Pardon the dog lover in me. Heehee.)

Connections instantly
Created
When we met


I can relate, only too well. I grew up taking care of almost a dozen dogs. Sigh. Thank you for posting this picture. It made my day. ^_^

Phal said...

mad rusty. mad.

he's lovely august... is he yours? or just from somewhere? (say he's yours.. you getmajor points if he is)

gulnaz said...
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gulnaz said...

he is adorable!!!

"Complete communion
Coming closer
After you left" Perfect!

mermaid said...

"Complete communion
Coming closer
After you left"

I like the play on space here. Complete communion suggests no more gap to be bridged or filled, but the memory brings the person even closer.

chaos said...

hey :A:... your poems reminds me of poems by Javed Akhtar; if you like Hindi Poetry, do lieten to Tarkash (Javed's collection)...

Beautiful... philosophical!

Jithu said...

simple and gr88!!

feminine expressions said...

your poetry stops me, makes me ponder, makes me wonder, takes me deeper...

Ash said...

Awww, he (she ?) is so adorable... now give us a name to go with the face :)

Billy said...

intense you paint

.m. said...

a beautiful baby you got there.

Geetanjali said...

Awwwwww....

Mayur Channagere said...

Complete communion
Coming closer
After you left

Beautiful... for i had a dog too and i lost him a year back.. .and these words can only express how i feel about him...
Cheers

Prerona said...

thats an awesome pic. and beautiful words :)

. : A : . said...

rusty - Yes, I caught you doing the same on your latest post! :-)

Soulless, chaos, jithU, Billy, Prerona - Thanks. Glad you liked it.

Phal - In a way, yes. How many points do I get?

gulnaz, Wbix, Geetanjali - :-)

mermaid - Exactly.

feminine expressions - *bows*

Ash - It's a he. No names shall be named. ;-)

Mayur Channagere - Glad you could relate.

venus said...

awww, very cute picture to go with your poem!

Aradhita said...

Lovely one. So much warmth in the thoughts and the pic.

thoughts said...

dogs are gr8...puppies are best !!! needless to say ...the lines are terrific : connections instantly created when we met - rare but happens nevertheless....

Tabor said...

I was thinking of the pets left behind in Louisiana and Mississippi when I read this blog...

. : A : . said...

venus, Aradhita, thoughts - Thanks.

Tabor - Thanks for dropping by and commenting.

stan laurel said...

adorable...especially the picture!

aristera says said...

sublime.
very nice.
you must read deepti naval's poetry. she is very good. your style reminds me of her work.

. : A : . said...

stan laurel - Thanks.

aristera says - I have not read any of her poems. Do you have a link to a site which might have them up?

yvaine said...

Beautiful! And I love the photograph too!

. : A : . said...

yvaine - Thanks.

Sudarshan said...

"Complete communion
Coming closer
After you left"
-evocative

. : A : . said...

Sudarshan - Thanks!

Brood Mode said...

awesome post, very moving. loved the pic, love dogs!

. : A : . said...

Brood Mode - Glad you liked it.