. . New clouds
. . . Greet me when
. . . . Returning home to
. . . . . You
. Could
. . Love be the answer
. . . Of your
. . . . Understanding
. . . . . Despite the anger
. . . . . . Shown
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- There is a magic in the air that permeates through the very soul of my existence. There is a stillness in the night that floods my senses beyond my imagination. There is a madness inside of me that overflows in everything that I create. There is a past behind me that is overcrowded with memories that drain me out.
25 comments:
like the way you have structured your words,like a waterfall of words...
You know August, the last verse is so simple, but it says so much. I think I tend to favor this type of verse the most.
I once took a course on communication between partners, and it taught me so much. I realize that when I am angry at him, I may be reacting to my own sadness, or insecurities. It is so tough to take responsibility for your own baggage, but it helps clear the clouds and air of confusion.
Well said.
that sky, that photo is mesmerising!!! its the kind of sunset i imagine a deseret will have...ooh such crimsons and such pinks!
about your verse: i think its beautiful...i keep using this word, but well it honestly is.
I agree with mermaid about anger being about more than the triggering issue but, well, love/kisses conquers all...corny but true. :)
WOW! this is fantastic !the words and the picture,very nice!
do you write around a picture? I always meant to ask you, but never got around to it. Though it does seem to be the logical answer... Like I write to music, but I don't think people can tell. Which is good. :p
Anger is a good thing. Very cleansing. I reccomend it to everyone.
Like your stlye.
Nice..very nice indeed :))
i have always been left speechless, when i read ur posts. the words, the picture just blend, make sense...
beautifully put, as usual
KJ
i like the namelessness of your pictures, especially this one, they could be anywhere. that piece of sky could be over arizona or seychelles or backwaters of kerela or Pehelgam....and i like that. one owns the world and not little pieces of it.
clouds...
hmm...
very familiar...
8)
great use of space in your poetry. not only this one, but in some previous posts as well.
and a longing that runs through all of them.
yes, anger.... ummm... over rated.
;-)
can i be macabre and say dat the clouds look like evil radioactive fumes let loose by Dr Evil to destroy all earthlings? ;-) yes, i AM looking forward to Episode III, as u can see.
Oh my. Breath-taking picture, that.
That was just G O R G E O U S !
A magnificent expanse of sky. I'd love to soak in that glow!!
a gorgeous snap and equally lovely words. always a pleasure to drop by.
Well,the pic makes me drift off into those lanes of memory.
And the lines are wonderful
Simplicity is an art; so is subtlety. And you seem to have mastered both!
Like the way you've structured the words. Great depth in the way you suspect Love being the reason for anger :)
A classy post!
great pics here.. are u the same english august as on blogdrive.com?
Its the centre of the being, a cauldron of all human emotions with that heated centre...
Lovely!
i have no words to describe what i feel when i read this.... each time a different feeling! WOW
i second anil...it really looks like a waterfall...something like haiku or cinquain...something in that genre
Love the way U weave words around the pic.. The careful placement of each word.. & the spaces bewteen each word.. A wonderful balancing act..which u pull off quite well each time :)
P.S. : Posted some new pics @ my place.. but mine are bereft of any words !! Just bare silent pics..
Love the way you've strcutured your words to give the verse this very staccato rhythm - those dots reminded me of the Brail...
Btw just wondering - noticed how most your photos have this very saturated colour - is that natually so or do you play with the images b4 you post them? This one looks fiery against your Black background! Awesome as usual!
:) churned clouds and churned emotions??
ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!
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