Monday, May 16, 2005

A view from the clouds

. Again
. . New clouds
. . . Greet me when
. . . . Returning home to
. . . . . You



. Could
. . Love be the answer
. . . Of your
. . . . Understanding
. . . . . Despite the anger
. . . . . . Shown


26 comments:

Jem Finch said...

Great snap.

Anil said...

like the way you have structured your words,like a waterfall of words...

mermaid said...

You know August, the last verse is so simple, but it says so much. I think I tend to favor this type of verse the most.

I once took a course on communication between partners, and it taught me so much. I realize that when I am angry at him, I may be reacting to my own sadness, or insecurities. It is so tough to take responsibility for your own baggage, but it helps clear the clouds and air of confusion.

Well said.

gulnaz said...

that sky, that photo is mesmerising!!! its the kind of sunset i imagine a deseret will have...ooh such crimsons and such pinks!
about your verse: i think its beautiful...i keep using this word, but well it honestly is.
I agree with mermaid about anger being about more than the triggering issue but, well, love/kisses conquers all...corny but true. :)

eden said...

WOW! this is fantastic !the words and the picture,very nice!

Phal said...

do you write around a picture? I always meant to ask you, but never got around to it. Though it does seem to be the logical answer... Like I write to music, but I don't think people can tell. Which is good. :p

Anger is a good thing. Very cleansing. I reccomend it to everyone.

sal said...

Like your stlye.

Aradhita said...

Nice..very nice indeed :))

KJ said...

i have always been left speechless, when i read ur posts. the words, the picture just blend, make sense...

beautifully put, as usual

KJ

gulnaz said...

i like the namelessness of your pictures, especially this one, they could be anywhere. that piece of sky could be over arizona or seychelles or backwaters of kerela or Pehelgam....and i like that. one owns the world and not little pieces of it.

atomicvelvetsigh said...

clouds...
hmm...
very familiar...
8)

wandering dervish said...

great use of space in your poetry. not only this one, but in some previous posts as well.
and a longing that runs through all of them.

livinghigh said...

yes, anger.... ummm... over rated.
;-)
can i be macabre and say dat the clouds look like evil radioactive fumes let loose by Dr Evil to destroy all earthlings? ;-) yes, i AM looking forward to Episode III, as u can see.

:..M..: said...

Oh my. Breath-taking picture, that.

NicoleBraganza said...

That was just G O R G E O U S !
A magnificent expanse of sky. I'd love to soak in that glow!!

small squirrel said...

a gorgeous snap and equally lovely words. always a pleasure to drop by.

Akruti said...

Well,the pic makes me drift off into those lanes of memory.
And the lines are wonderful

musafir said...

Simplicity is an art; so is subtlety. And you seem to have mastered both!

Like the way you've structured the words. Great depth in the way you suspect Love being the reason for anger :)

A classy post!

Twilight Fairy said...

great pics here.. are u the same english august as on blogdrive.com?

Pincushion said...

Its the centre of the being, a cauldron of all human emotions with that heated centre...
Lovely!

Brood Mode said...

i have no words to describe what i feel when i read this.... each time a different feeling! WOW

erratica said...

i second anil...it really looks like a waterfall...something like haiku or cinquain...something in that genre

parikrama said...

Love the way U weave words around the pic.. The careful placement of each word.. & the spaces bewteen each word.. A wonderful balancing act..which u pull off quite well each time :)

P.S. : Posted some new pics @ my place.. but mine are bereft of any words !! Just bare silent pics..

Geetanjali said...

Love the way you've strcutured your words to give the verse this very staccato rhythm - those dots reminded me of the Brail...

Btw just wondering - noticed how most your photos have this very saturated colour - is that natually so or do you play with the images b4 you post them? This one looks fiery against your Black background! Awesome as usual!

Elixir said...

:) churned clouds and churned emotions??

Samudraa said...

ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!