A perception
Of motion
Created
Of stillness
Recreated
The sound
Of motion
Muffled
The sound
Of stillness
Deafening
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A dream within a dream
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- There is a magic in the air that permeates through the very soul of my existence. There is a stillness in the night that floods my senses beyond my imagination. There is a madness inside of me that overflows in everything that I create. There is a past behind me that is overcrowded with memories that drain me out.
14 comments:
i like the beat of your poem, its almost like a heartbeat....of somene going further and further away from all that surrounds him.
It moves
I was going to say the same thing. The rhythm is truly moving. Excellent!
"The sound
Of stillness
Deafening"
Only a wise soul, only a wise soul A, could come up with this. I'm reading a book titled, "In Praise of Slowness", thanks to Ili's blog. It's interesting how Western religion views time as linear, where time is sand through an hourglass that will run out with death. In Eastern religion, time is reborn, constantly renewing it's self.
Loved this.
I love the visual aspect of this poem. It has motion and stillness together. Very effective.
how strange! i cud have sworn that I had commented on de earlier entry!!! ;-)
anyhow.. i love the picture u posted here.. gives an impression of SPEED to the words. ;-) niiiiice!
Very rhythmic, very poetic. Loved the way you've played with oxymorons. And ofcourse as always your interpretation of the image!
gulnaz - Thanks for your thoughts on this. Very interesting and different from the way I thought about it.
Garrison Steelle - It does.
Zee, Geetanjali - Thanks.
PoeticMermaid - Interesting thoughts. I must pick up the book.
stan laurel, livinghigh - Mission accomplished! :-)
jenn see - :-)
The feel of motion
Dazed
The feel of stillness
Elevated
Elixir - Ah, yes. That was a nice one!
This post was one of the nicest ones i've read or seen in a long time :)
J - Gee, thanks a lot! Look forward to seeing you again. :-)
wow. its a real beauty.
n i like...the sound of motion muffled...the sound of stillness deafening.
sneha - Thanks!
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