Saturday, November 26, 2005

Being with her

She whispers to me
Ever so softly
Her tinkling
Adding music
To the wind



She sways towards me
Ever so boldly
Her chimes
A rhapsody
To the night



She flutters away from me
Ever so playfully
Her pealing
Adding festivity
To the moment



She rises over me
Ever so quietly
Her silence
A testament
To her exquisiteness



35 comments:

Cecilia said...

Lovely photos. Vivid descriptions. You make me want to be her--->at least to be described like that by a special someone.

Φ said...

nice one

aparna said...

lovely!

Sayesha said...

Dude you should write a book of your poetry and photos! :)

rusty said...

Do you actually get to enjoy these words ? These musical notes....do you ever fill yourself up with them.....live them ?

Rohit Talwar said...

splendid!

dude.. how do you manage to write so beautifully! am jealous! big time.

. : A : . said...

Cecilia - :-)

Φ, aparna, Rohit Talwar - Thanks.

Sayesha - I already have!

rusty - Sometimes, sometimes.

Anne said...

I really needed to read that. Have a great weekend.
:)

finnegan said...

The "she" is in the sky.

Phoenix said...

i dont think these pics need any words....

second_wind said...

nice.
the pics are beautiful

. : A : . said...

Anne - Glad it helped. Have a great weekend too.

finnegan - Maybe.

Phoenix, second_wind - Thanks.

Harshi said...

Beautiful.

Loved these lines esp. ..
>Her silence
>A testament
>To her exquisiteness

So well observed and understood in that magnificent way...

Blue Athena said...

and then
she draws closer
her breath
straddles mine
and she
pulls me in
in her world
enticing, lilting
divine...


PS: I like this. The images and your words that so daintily depict a world so delicate, so melodic! :)

rusty said...

So do you think it is possible to spend the rest of your life with that much ? Or does one need to create new moments to live ?

. : A : . said...

Harshi - Thanks.

Blue Athena - Thank you for sharing your words here.

rusty - I don't think the past is ever enough. You always need to create new moments, and possible even better ones.

the Monk said...

ah,but that was beautiful....

stella said...

she
sounds
beautiful
like your poem... ;)

bert moth said...

I love the symmetry of the pictures and words... there are layers to each... the same but different. Wonderful!

silvermoon said...

Love is music.
So are your words and images.

Anonymous Poet said...

What a wonderful interlude! Thanks for sharing!

Mrudula said...

Your photographs are usually always wonderful. This time your poetry balances your photograph. Even then I find your photographs poetic. Please post more of them.

aquamarine said...

riot of colours captured beautifully

:)
AquaM

aquamarine said...

riot of colours captured beautifully
ur first pic is my favourite

:)
AquaM

Casablanca said...

Such colorful photos... mmmmm!

You have a book? Where where?

Extempore said...

The colours, Augustus! Wonderful, wonderful shots! :-)

Gangadhar said...

fantastic pics!! Lovely lyrics too..

Aradhita said...

I reeeeallllly liked this one!Amazing imagery! :)

Pincushion said...

Loved the vivid pictures and the lovely musical lyrics swaying to the wind chimes :)

atomicvelvetsigh said...

a lovely collage of images and words. makes one's spirit ponder with the thought of who could these souls be?

. : A : . said...

the Monk, Ô¿Ô, silvermoon, Anonymous Poet, aquamarine, Extempore, Gangadhar, Aradhita, Pincushion, atomicvelvetsigh - Thank you. Glad you liked it.

stella - And she is.

Mrudula - Thanks. More coming up soon!

Casablanca - More than one actually. All waiting for their moment.

Shashank Jain said...

These words just impel one to the world of imagination. very nice.

. : A : . said...

Shashank Jain - Thanks.

yvaine said...

Beautiful, as always Mr. A.

Jackal said...

'She rises over me
Ever so quietly
Her silence
A testament
To her exquisiteness'

Beautiful.