Friday, October 15, 2004

Mirror

And in another world
Things happened differently
The way they were
Supposed to happen
And in this world
Things happened differently
The way they were
Not supposed to happen


7 comments:

Jessica said...

Something like Alice, but in reverse maybe? Nice piece.

Miss Qt said...

Nice!

Thanks for stopping by my blog!

Ariel said...

I like the directness of this piece. Definitely bittersweet.

Rachel said...

Sometimes I believe that the mirror is what shows our real us. Our eyes look closely to the mirror because they want to find more. More than we can't in this world. Our reality is a distorted reflection of what is behind in the unseen.

. : A : . said...

Jessica, Queen Mo, Ariel, Pandora - Thanks for your comments. Glad you liked it.

Jessica - I never thought of it as Alice, but I can now see where you are drawing the parallel.

Ariel - I did have some bittersweet in mind when I wrote it.

Pandora - Great thought on the reflection bit in the mirror; very close to what I was trying to convey.

Toni said...

Got here through Blog Explosion.

This is an amazing piece.

I'm glad I read it. You are very talented!

. : A : . said...

Thanks Toni. Glad you enjoyed it. Look forward to having you back.