did your life
change
why
are you
now
where
i was
then
are you
now
where
i was
then
who
haunts you
today
what
do you
think of
do you
think of
when
she looks
at you
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A dream within a dream
About Me
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- There is a magic in the air that permeates through the very soul of my existence. There is a stillness in the night that floods my senses beyond my imagination. There is a madness inside of me that overflows in everything that I create. There is a past behind me that is overcrowded with memories that drain me out.
25 comments:
u seem to be very melancholy nowadays...
wonderful. glad i came over to the blog to read this. bloglines subtracted much of the effect! wonderful. specially with the background and the words - total effect is wonderful :)
strange things this reminded me off
Life
stopped, and
turned around
Questions
answered
themselves to me
I
tried then
to breathe her in
Still
unable to
catch my breath
Now
I search
for life in vain
Is he in two places at once, visiting the same woman throughout her life?
The format of this poem is perfect. I especially love the lines:
why
are you
now
where
i was
then
ep
Crypic, indeed. An interrogation stemming from jealousy or simple curiosity? hmm.
hey .:a:.,
its been a long time...good to see that your style hasn't changed one bit..
well i just realized how generic / versatile the line are...
keep them coming.
cheers
YOur love of the antithetical lends itself to beautiful form and the art of poetry.
:)
Wonderful piece of poetry this! the melancholic tone and found the title quite thought-provoking. Lovely :)
Beautiful. Lovely as always. I have not been by for a while, but your writing is as poignant as it ever was.
why are you now
where i was then....
feels like out under microscope.
I like it.
life
changed
when
she looked
i am
where i
was never
before
i was
where i
was never
before
when she
looks
i just
watch
time stops
life changes
i dont
think.
very nice bro.
beautiful blog.
Ah, the very basic questions in life..as with our basic senses....how, why, where, who, what and when? Beautifully written.
wonderful form u have got !!
touching post !!
taking sides.pro and cons.half and half. here and there. this and this. I like how you separated your poem. And keeping it whole.
melancholy and beautiful.
i suppose you wanted to say "Where are you now" and then "where am i"... isnt it?
loved the title to your post.. and it is an uncertain problem indeed.. and not all the how/what/where/why/who/when would really help i guess !
Wonderful!
i liked the way you have put very subtle questions in a poetic form!
you hear the silence, don't you? - .:M:.
nice style
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